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Dear Mary,
Congratulations! I saw your name listed in the website of the University of California, Los Angeles (UCLA) as one of the successful passers of their University Entrance Examination. I know you could really make it smart girl! I’m so proud of you.
I know it’s your long time dream to be admitted at UCLA and now that dream is a reality. It’s the start of your great trek to success. Mary, this is just the start of the many challenges you will be facing. But with your determination and strong faith in God, there is no way but to be on top and achieve all your goals.
I’m so happy for you my friend. It was as if I have won the jackpot in the lottery when I read your name. My mom was astonished as how I jump and shouted for joy. How I wish I could be there with you to celebrate this great achievement. Don’t worry, as soon as I get back to California I will go straight to your house and we will celebrate and let the whole world know that my friend is an UCLA passer. Hurray!
With lots of love,
Jennifer